If you haven't seen the first draft (rough copy) you can see it here.
As for the final copy here it is on Albino Black Sheep. You can judge for yourself on how significant the changes are.
"He that loveth pleasure shall be a poor man: he that loveth wine and oil shall not be rich." - Proverbs 21:17 KJV
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