Surn's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien helicopter]

Heh, heh

First time I saw something as animated as this on the portal. What would make this complete is if you learned to shade. For example, on your red bits try lining it with a somewhat darker shade of red.

Tott responds:

It's just two frames y'know. :P

[Star Wars: Electro-Staff]

I don't remember what they were using...

...but the preview made it look like a lollypop. Still you got lots of good structure to this, good job.

[Zombie Animal Crossing]

True that

Once you've played long enough you realize: that's all they really are.

[Steve Van Gogh]

Heh, heh, heh

Reminds me of Nickelodeon. Good job on shading with all those erratic strokes.

[Mermaid MSPaint]

Overall- Very Good

Kudos on not giving her over-sized breasts (as people constantly use in this context) which puts you a step above the rest (because appealing to hormones is very low). My only complaint is that there is still room for shading. Still this is very good considering it was done in MS Paint.

[Meteor]

Skeleton

The middle-legs look a tad out of place. I would suggest incorporating two sets of hips in the stick-figure phase of your drawing. Other than that well-done.

heather-lanham responds:

:O YOU CAN COMMENT ON ART?

also, thank you very much!

[Rays]

WANT!

Very nice and simple. Is there some way you can make this into a full circle? Then it would make an excellent animated background (which I would definitely use).

[Come For ME]

The large breasts are unnecessairy

I think your art skills are good enough that you don't need to appeal to hormones to have your work appreciated.
Furthermore it's interesting that you use the word "crush".

Typical Newgrounder: "Heh, heh, yeah she's gonna crush em with her boobs"