Surn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[You can !]

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Pros:
- Decent plot
- Appropriate music
- Pretty good for 2 days
Cons:
- Takes too long to do little
- Same thing played three times
- Suicide is not the answer (big one)

Icandraw responds:

:S i didnt get ur point :S

[Clay Volcano]

Pretty good.

This shows imagination and a good handle on claymation. My main complaint with this is that you should have made a background (at least some means of a drape or something).

Coda9 responds:

haha but isnt world in confilct a good background? ;P next time ill put something up

[HatLamas short]

uh-huh....

Pros:
-Exciting music
- Had sound effects

Cons:
- Plot device of an excessively long power-up has already been used
(see: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /515146)
- Aesthetics could use work

sandordude responds:

I know that it has already been used.. but thanks

[Tiddlywank]

For a while I thought this was just a loop

Pros:
- Good artistic and animation quality
- Good voice acting
Cons:
- Powering up took way to long(1)
- Characters were a tad stiff

1) This was the major one. Even if this was parodying how much time is spent on DBZ doing one thing, you probably could have substituted the time with a series of "# minutes later" screens.

Sirschmoopy responds:

"I thought this was a loop"

[The legend of kent]

Overall:

Pros:
- Appropriate music
- Surprise end
Cons:
- Music stops too early
- Background and snowflakes a tad shoddy

Animatigo responds:

Now that I think about it The music does cut out a bit to fast, maybe I should've made it fade.
The backgrounds are ones that I found for paper mario, sorry if they look like crap :(
And the snowflakes were animated very quickly so there wasn't much effort out into it.

[An_Tree]

Overall: Not really an animation

Pros:
- Looks good
- Appropriate music
Cons:
- Is little more than an animated picture
- Snow effect needs work

Comments:
Perhaps if you added a back story to the scene it would boost the rating like in here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /496723

SirCannabisClock responds:

Well thank you for your input sir

I actually couldn't agree more, the snow is definitely off. I feel it moves too fast and goes all over the place. Furthermore, I considered adding a short story but it would of meant adding a character to the picture.

[B'et und Tahwilliguh]

Overall: Overboard

Pros:
- Very original
- Random
Cons:
- Overboard on the weirdness
- Used the "B'et und Tahwilliguh" sound too much

ThrustViper responds:

Okay, Stug-asaurus rex

[FNF Pico Day sneak peep]

Overall: Good concept, poor animation

My main complaint is the poor aesthetics (overall look). For example you could have incorporated an actual background (rather than just grey) and you could stylized your text in paint then import them into this.

Either way, It's simple and to the point. I found myself going "YES!" when #1 on the list came around.

FattyWhale responds:

Yeah, threw this together quickly, I agree with everything you said though.