Surn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Atharian Pack Intro]

Overall: durgh....

Pros:
- Excellent animation
- Exhibits great knowledge of canine anatomy
- Kept sexual content out (which makes furries look good)

Cons:
- Wolves overused by furries in general.
- Seriousness doesn't work
- The flamboyant colors and markings ... well... ugh...

Comments:
You should have seen my face as I was watching this. Does this remind you of "My Little Pony" somehow? I would advise you to tone down the colorful markings somewhat

CryingChimera responds:

I'm sorry it did that until it loaded! D: I have a preloader nao.
And as for the markings- it's supposed to be middle earthish.
And let's face it - gray wolves get boring quicker then colorful ones.

And I'm not a furry- I just love wolves.
And just between you, me and whoever else reads this response- all of the wolves except for the one who was mostly black with a moon pendant, were made up on the spot. XD

[Geo Space Trailer]

Overall: Okay

Pros:
- Drawing skills good
- Color scheme appropriate
- Music is exciting
Cons:
- Plot looks like a common one
- Uncanny resemblance to "The Karnage Incident": another flash found on this site

Comment:
If you haven't seen "The Karnage Incident"(1) I'd suggest looking it up to avoid getting to close to it in your plot

1) Yes it's spelled "Karnage"

GeoRama responds:

oh dam looks like it everyway.... dude ill have to change it. thanks for letting me know. My mate showed me that along time ago.

[12th Arcana - Hanged Man]

Overall: Fair

Pros:
- Good drawing skills
- Sound well incorporated
Cons:
- Too short, too simple

Comment:
This would be great for the title page of your website (if you get one)

Ramber responds:

Well...actually, i'm not really good at drawing...it took me much longer than expecting, but i'm glad you found it nice.
And for the website, well...I will make one when i know how!
KTHKS for the review, and the encouragement.

[the worst reviewer]

Overall: brilliant

Pro:
- You nearly gave me a heart-attack
Con
- Aesthetically lacking

Comment:
How did you do that?

InvertedScrotum responds:

magic my friend

[MArio - BAd Trip]

Overall: Great improvement

Pros:
- Imaginative
- Good drawings skills
- Music incorporated more effectively
Cons:
- no sound effects
- End bits look butchered
- You'll probably offend some twelve-year-olds with this

golfinho responds:

thank you human!!!

[It's Over...]

Overall: Mediocre

Pros:
- Very good concept (realistic look at crushing a "scouter")
- Drawing is pretty good
- used sound effects
Cons:
- No music through body of production
- Characters were stiff
- Naruto

Digishinobi responds:

thanks, i'll try to avoid naruto for the time being.

[Woman Amazes sex]

Well, that was disturbing- keep up the good work!

My only complaints are the length and lack of color. Your works seem to be quite short, so I'd suggest putting them all into one swf file at the end of the year. Chances are that will make it to front page.

golfinho responds:

thanks
I am going to think in including more onion