Surn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Geo Space Trailer]

Overall: Okay

Pros:
- Drawing skills good
- Color scheme appropriate
- Music is exciting
Cons:
- Plot looks like a common one
- Uncanny resemblance to "The Karnage Incident": another flash found on this site

Comment:
If you haven't seen "The Karnage Incident"(1) I'd suggest looking it up to avoid getting to close to it in your plot

1) Yes it's spelled "Karnage"

GeoRama responds:

oh dam looks like it everyway.... dude ill have to change it. thanks for letting me know. My mate showed me that along time ago.

[12th Arcana - Hanged Man]

Overall: Fair

Pros:
- Good drawing skills
- Sound well incorporated
Cons:
- Too short, too simple

Comment:
This would be great for the title page of your website (if you get one)

Ramber responds:

Well...actually, i'm not really good at drawing...it took me much longer than expecting, but i'm glad you found it nice.
And for the website, well...I will make one when i know how!
KTHKS for the review, and the encouragement.

[the worst reviewer]

Overall: brilliant

Pro:
- You nearly gave me a heart-attack
Con
- Aesthetically lacking

Comment:
How did you do that?

InvertedScrotum responds:

magic my friend

[MArio - BAd Trip]

Overall: Great improvement

Pros:
- Imaginative
- Good drawings skills
- Music incorporated more effectively
Cons:
- no sound effects
- End bits look butchered
- You'll probably offend some twelve-year-olds with this

golfinho responds:

thank you human!!!

[It's Over...]

Overall: Mediocre

Pros:
- Very good concept (realistic look at crushing a "scouter")
- Drawing is pretty good
- used sound effects
Cons:
- No music through body of production
- Characters were stiff
- Naruto

Digishinobi responds:

thanks, i'll try to avoid naruto for the time being.

[Woman Amazes sex]

Well, that was disturbing- keep up the good work!

My only complaints are the length and lack of color. Your works seem to be quite short, so I'd suggest putting them all into one swf file at the end of the year. Chances are that will make it to front page.

golfinho responds:

thanks
I am going to think in including more onion

[Love-A Story.]

Overall: Excelllent

Pros have already been covered by the other reviewers so I'll mention cons
- It leaves us with the question "what was that opportunity and why was it so important that he had to leave her"?
- Those things look distinctively like the pokémon- eevee
- At first I wasn't able to tell that the narrator was female, perhaps a few tell-tale signs would (even cliche) have helped established that earlier on

skullitron333 responds:

Surn-

(Original)First statement- (It leaves us with the question "what was that opportunity and why was it so important that he had to leave her"?)- In the flash she said that he had to go far away for an opportunity.
Second statement- (Those things look distinctively like the pokémon- eevee)- Yes, she does use the pokemon Eevee alot in her animations, not sure exactly why, my best guess is she likes the way they look and uses custom looking eevee to represent her characters. you can see more of her work involving eevee at Deviant Art where she posted most of her work.
Last statement- (At first I wasn't able to tell that the narrator was female, perhaps a few tell-tale signs would (even cliche) have helped established that earlier on)- well her name was TheHeroine, and she even had that established at the title screen of the flash. Other than that, yea it would have been a while before realizing the narrator was a female.(Original)

Well, I looked at the flash file on my computer with the window wider than the animation and saw that part of the sentence was cut off. It realy said "I went to a distant land for an opportunity" many people missed this.

-Skullitron333