Surn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Woman Talk]

Very Clever

Great concept but visuals could use some work. If you intend to remake this I suggest incorporating something to the effect of a chart.

[B'et und Tahwilliguh]

Overall: Overboard

Pros:
- Very original
- Random
Cons:
- Overboard on the weirdness
- Used the "B'et und Tahwilliguh" sound too much

ThrustViper responds:

Okay, Stug-asaurus rex

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Meh...

It's a nice animation and all, but it's only amusing for about the first 10 seconds. I also really don't care for the pink and green.

[Wild Wild West]

Overall: Overload

Pros:
- A legitimate animutation (unlike mine)
- Follows the music
- Lots of action

Cons:
- Too much use of the flashing background
- Too much going on

[FNF Pico Day sneak peep]

Overall: Good concept, poor animation

My main complaint is the poor aesthetics (overall look). For example you could have incorporated an actual background (rather than just grey) and you could stylized your text in paint then import them into this.

Either way, It's simple and to the point. I found myself going "YES!" when #1 on the list came around.

FattyWhale responds:

Yeah, threw this together quickly, I agree with everything you said though.

[You Can't meow]

Overall: lacking

Pros:
- Animation was acceptable
- Used a preloader (though this was small enough that I could have done without)
- simple
Cons:
-Hard to hear what the black one was saying at the end
- Excess mouth noises were irritating (the noise you made with your mouth between meows)
- No background

Comments:
I'd suggest not posting small things like this in a file by themselves. Think of it this way: Would you present your guests with a plate of one cookie or a plate of cookies?

[The Princess and the Frog]

Overall: good

Pros:
- Random
- Incorporation of sound effects
Cons:
- Drawing needs work
- Try incorporating music

Comment:
If you have a bunch of shorts like this, try putting them in one flash file.

[Atharian Pack Intro]

Overall: durgh....

Pros:
- Excellent animation
- Exhibits great knowledge of canine anatomy
- Kept sexual content out (which makes furries look good)

Cons:
- Wolves overused by furries in general.
- Seriousness doesn't work
- The flamboyant colors and markings ... well... ugh...

Comments:
You should have seen my face as I was watching this. Does this remind you of "My Little Pony" somehow? I would advise you to tone down the colorful markings somewhat

CryingChimera responds:

I'm sorry it did that until it loaded! D: I have a preloader nao.
And as for the markings- it's supposed to be middle earthish.
And let's face it - gray wolves get boring quicker then colorful ones.

And I'm not a furry- I just love wolves.
And just between you, me and whoever else reads this response- all of the wolves except for the one who was mostly black with a moon pendant, were made up on the spot. XD

[Metal Gear Porno XXX Hot!]

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Like your other spam, this flash is fun to watch for a few seconds- but of course gets old. I suggest putting your spam in a master file then posting it to new grounds. Then you might have yourself a winner.

[Geo Space Trailer]

Overall: Okay

Pros:
- Drawing skills good
- Color scheme appropriate
- Music is exciting
Cons:
- Plot looks like a common one
- Uncanny resemblance to "The Karnage Incident": another flash found on this site

Comment:
If you haven't seen "The Karnage Incident"(1) I'd suggest looking it up to avoid getting to close to it in your plot

1) Yes it's spelled "Karnage"

GeoRama responds:

oh dam looks like it everyway.... dude ill have to change it. thanks for letting me know. My mate showed me that along time ago.