Surn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Musical Mingle]

Overall: very good

Pros:
- Imaginative
- Nice to listen to
- Creepy at the end
Cons:
- Much room for improvement in animation and drawing
- Kind of slow
- Lack of color

[It's Over...]

Overall: Mediocre

Pros:
- Very good concept (realistic look at crushing a "scouter")
- Drawing is pretty good
- used sound effects
Cons:
- No music through body of production
- Characters were stiff
- Naruto

Digishinobi responds:

thanks, i'll try to avoid naruto for the time being.

[Woman Amazes sex]

Well, that was disturbing- keep up the good work!

My only complaints are the length and lack of color. Your works seem to be quite short, so I'd suggest putting them all into one swf file at the end of the year. Chances are that will make it to front page.

golfinho responds:

thanks
I am going to think in including more onion

[Super Mario Bros Z ep.149]

Great stuff!

This was a great parody, the sprites do indeed seem to "spin" a lot. My only complaints are the short length and the lack of a replay button (and I did watch this over and over again).

As for your poor scoring one of my guesses are that some twelve-year-olds were offended by the blaspheming of what their "heroes".

[Love-A Story.]

Overall: Excelllent

Pros have already been covered by the other reviewers so I'll mention cons
- It leaves us with the question "what was that opportunity and why was it so important that he had to leave her"?
- Those things look distinctively like the pokémon- eevee
- At first I wasn't able to tell that the narrator was female, perhaps a few tell-tale signs would (even cliche) have helped established that earlier on

skullitron333 responds:

Surn-

(Original)First statement- (It leaves us with the question "what was that opportunity and why was it so important that he had to leave her"?)- In the flash she said that he had to go far away for an opportunity.
Second statement- (Those things look distinctively like the pokémon- eevee)- Yes, she does use the pokemon Eevee alot in her animations, not sure exactly why, my best guess is she likes the way they look and uses custom looking eevee to represent her characters. you can see more of her work involving eevee at Deviant Art where she posted most of her work.
Last statement- (At first I wasn't able to tell that the narrator was female, perhaps a few tell-tale signs would (even cliche) have helped established that earlier on)- well her name was TheHeroine, and she even had that established at the title screen of the flash. Other than that, yea it would have been a while before realizing the narrator was a female.(Original)

Well, I looked at the flash file on my computer with the window wider than the animation and saw that part of the sentence was cut off. It realy said "I went to a distant land for an opportunity" many people missed this.

-Skullitron333

[Sonic And The Secret C.e]

Overall: pretty good

Pros:
+ Decent drawing ability
+ Didn't use sprites
+ Interesting replay button
Cons
- Intro Credits and opening running sequence a bit long
- Characters seem stiff at times
- This has been done many times before (though usually with sprites)

[Kalvin the Movie]

right...

You're good at visuals but storyline could use work.
Example: If someone burst through the roof of your car would you be casual about it? If they were on a casual basis would the one shoot the others head off?

I also think you underrated the violence content.