Surn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MArio - BAd Trip]

Overall: Great improvement

Pros:
- Imaginative
- Good drawings skills
- Music incorporated more effectively
Cons:
- no sound effects
- End bits look butchered
- You'll probably offend some twelve-year-olds with this

golfinho responds:

thank you human!!!

[Musical Mingle]

Overall: very good

Pros:
- Imaginative
- Nice to listen to
- Creepy at the end
Cons:
- Much room for improvement in animation and drawing
- Kind of slow
- Lack of color

[It's Over...]

Overall: Mediocre

Pros:
- Very good concept (realistic look at crushing a "scouter")
- Drawing is pretty good
- used sound effects
Cons:
- No music through body of production
- Characters were stiff
- Naruto

Digishinobi responds:

thanks, i'll try to avoid naruto for the time being.

[Woman Amazes sex]

Well, that was disturbing- keep up the good work!

My only complaints are the length and lack of color. Your works seem to be quite short, so I'd suggest putting them all into one swf file at the end of the year. Chances are that will make it to front page.

golfinho responds:

thanks
I am going to think in including more onion

[Super Mario Bros Z ep.149]

Great stuff!

This was a great parody, the sprites do indeed seem to "spin" a lot. My only complaints are the short length and the lack of a replay button (and I did watch this over and over again).

As for your poor scoring one of my guesses are that some twelve-year-olds were offended by the blaspheming of what their "heroes".

[Sonic And The Secret C.e]

Overall: pretty good

Pros:
+ Decent drawing ability
+ Didn't use sprites
+ Interesting replay button
Cons
- Intro Credits and opening running sequence a bit long
- Characters seem stiff at times
- This has been done many times before (though usually with sprites)

[Kalvin the Movie]

right...

You're good at visuals but storyline could use work.
Example: If someone burst through the roof of your car would you be casual about it? If they were on a casual basis would the one shoot the others head off?

I also think you underrated the violence content.