Surn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Geo Space Trailer]

Overall: Okay

Pros:
- Drawing skills good
- Color scheme appropriate
- Music is exciting
Cons:
- Plot looks like a common one
- Uncanny resemblance to "The Karnage Incident": another flash found on this site

Comment:
If you haven't seen "The Karnage Incident"(1) I'd suggest looking it up to avoid getting to close to it in your plot

1) Yes it's spelled "Karnage"

GeoRama responds:

oh dam looks like it everyway.... dude ill have to change it. thanks for letting me know. My mate showed me that along time ago.

[12th Arcana - Hanged Man]

Overall: Fair

Pros:
- Good drawing skills
- Sound well incorporated
Cons:
- Too short, too simple

Comment:
This would be great for the title page of your website (if you get one)

Ramber responds:

Well...actually, i'm not really good at drawing...it took me much longer than expecting, but i'm glad you found it nice.
And for the website, well...I will make one when i know how!
KTHKS for the review, and the encouragement.

[Sad Cat]

Overall: poor

Pros:
- Great concept
- Appropriate music
Cons:
- Doesn't do much of anything (falling snowflakes alone won't cut it)
- No story or plot (within presentation)

Comment:
As I said it's a good concept, if you develop it you may have yourself a winner.

[Love and Memories]

Overall: nothing too bad

Pros:
- Lip sync
- Music followed well
Cons:
- Some parts were too long (ex. the blurry logo)
- Some parts had little-no movement (ex. dinner scene)

Comments:
- I suggest practicing drawing

[the worst reviewer]

Overall: brilliant

Pro:
- You nearly gave me a heart-attack
Con
- Aesthetically lacking

Comment:
How did you do that?

InvertedScrotum responds:

magic my friend

[Get Your Skates On]

Overall: sure...

Pros:
- Drawing Skills decent
- Plot flows smoothly
- Great use of music and sound effects
Cons:
- Fade-outs (ie before the car incident) take away from the illusion of constant action
- If it weren't for the characters being animals this would be nothing new
- Cliché use of basketball and fireworks

Comments:
- For the record, I couldn't have done better
- Was it just me or did one of those three girls have a head just like the protagonist?

[The Birth of Cuddlepop]

Overall: Pretty, but severed

Pros:
- Drawing Skills
- Facial Expressions were appropriate
- Incorporation of music and sound effects

Cons
- Voice acting could have been better
- Somewhat Cliché
- Contextually and logically lacking (Back-story should have been in the presentation. Why would she destroy something that she not only worked hard on but was also benign ?)

[Something with Pico in it]

Overall: Decent

Pros:
- Good drawing skills
- Decent plot development
- Good voice acting
Cons:
- Emotions not supported by body language and facial expression
- More talk than action
- No music through body of presentation

[Toccata de Pico]

Overall: Good

Pros:
- Good incorporation of "Toccata and Fugue"
- Lots of variation
- Attacked icons idolized by twelve-year-olds everywhere
Cons:
- White and orange only
- Beginning credits kind of long
- not a lot of effort on drawing

[Bear's movie...(TRAILER)]

Overall: mediocre

Pros:
- Decent animation
- No preloader for a small flash
Cons:
- Animation gets old
- Too much text, not enough animation